Some Practice Hindi Sentences

I have been slacking on practicing my Hindi the past couple years but I am still moving forward, slowly and surely.

Here is my most recent practice sentences. Please correct any mistakes that you see

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Aap mujhe kya laana chahate hain?
What do you want me to bring?

Aap mujhe dinner ke liye kya laana chahate hain?
What do you want me to bring to dinner?

Mujhe aapko dinner ke liye kya laana chahate hain?
What do you want me to bring to your dinner?

Kya tum desi khana chahoge?
Would you like to bring Indian food?

Kya tum meri sath desi khaana banana chahogi?
Would you like to cook Indian food with me?

Kya tum mera dinner ke liye jaana chahoge
Would you like to cone to my dinner?

Mera dinner ke baad main thaka hua hongi
After my dinner I will be tired

Abhi tum kya karogi?
What are you going to do right now?

Ab tum kya karogi?
What are you going to do?

Ab tum movie ke baad (mein?) Kya karogi?
What are you going to do after the movie?

Main artist baanna.
I become artist.

Main ek din artist baanna. (Baanoongi)
One day I eill become an artist.

Jab main bacchi thi main baat kya ke...
When I was a child I said...


Kaunsa sentences accha hain? Galation correck kijie.

Main thoda thoda padna sakti hoon...
Mere pati ko classical hindusthani gaane pasand nahi bhi hai lekin mujhe pasand hai
Mujhe pet ka dard hai.
Mujhe pata hai - naya phrase hai

Lekin can you use
"Main jaanti hoon ke john kaha hai"
[8/18, 6:48 AM] Felicia Follum : Mujhe pata hai main cricket kelti hoon
I know how to play cricket

Aur cricket khelna pasand hai
Mujhe bhi yaqeen hai.

Mujhe parmeshvar yehova/bhagvaan/etc mein yaqeen hai.
I have faith in God

Mujhko ab kitab pardna hai mera kaam ke liye.
I need to read now for work

Thank you guys!!! I hope this was helpful for learners newer than me (and for learners of Hindi speakers who know more or are fluent, PLEASE CORRECT!)